Hi Glen I'm Hannah I really like the way you put a lot of effort into your work It really shows! and I also like the way you set your work out and put your WALT. keep up the good work I would love to see more from you!
Its Alyssa here from Grey Main School in the Mamaku hub.
Maby next time you could put a WALT in and why you did this how you did this. You put a lot of really good points on why Jesus would be a teacher maybe you could make the points into a persuasive writing on why he would be a good teacher.
This reminds me of when I was at my old school and my friend Lola did one on why she should be president.
Hi Glen I'm Hannah I really like the way you put a lot of effort into your work It really shows! and I also like the way you set your work out and put your WALT. keep up the good work I would love to see more from you!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback! And I will continue to keep up the great posts! :D
DeleteKia ora Glen,
ReplyDeleteIts Alyssa here from Grey Main School in the Mamaku hub.
Maby next time you could put a WALT in and why you did this how you did this. You put a lot of really good points on why Jesus would be a teacher maybe you could make the points into a persuasive writing on why he would be a good teacher.
This reminds me of when I was at my old school and my friend Lola did one on why she should be president.
Why did you do this?
Kakiteano
From Alyssa