Kia Ora Glen it's Rhys & Adi from Grey Main School in the Mamaku hub Your Tacos seem tasty. We think that you should of added in a picture of your tacos. 1 question how long did it take to make? Bye!
Hi Glen, This is Hurileigh, I am from Tautoro School in Room 4 and I like how you were enjoying your Tacos with your family. One thing that you need to work on is your paragraphs. Well you done a great job of telling us what you and your family done. Check my blog out if you want to. Hurileigh is signing out.
Hi Glen,This Kura from Tautoro School' I like how you have made some nice looking tacos,I think that there were a few thing that you need to work on is you punctuation and you vocabulary, but other then that I think that you have more then enough words to full me up with joy from your powerful story about having tacos with your family. Kura From Tautoro School
Kia ora Glen Great work.I love how you added some pictures but maybe next time you could add some more pictures and change the colour of your background. By Larissa
Kia ora my name is Angelina and I go to Grey Main School. I love tacos. I like that you have told in your post want ingrediants you need. Haw long does it take to cook it?
Kia Ora Glen it's Rhys & Adi from Grey Main School in the Mamaku hub
ReplyDeleteYour Tacos seem tasty. We think that you should of added in a picture of your tacos. 1 question how long did it take to make?
Bye!
Hi Glen, This is Hurileigh, I am from Tautoro School in Room 4 and I like how you were enjoying your Tacos with your family. One thing that you need to work on is your paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteWell you done a great job of telling us what you and your family done. Check my blog out if you want to. Hurileigh is signing out.
Hi Glen,This Kura from Tautoro School' I like how you have made some nice looking tacos,I think that there were a few thing that you need to work on is you punctuation and you vocabulary, but other then that I think that you have more then enough words to full me up with joy from your powerful story about having tacos with your family.
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Kia ora Glen
ReplyDeleteGreat work.I love how you added some pictures but maybe next time you could add some more pictures and change the colour of your background.
By Larissa
Kia ora my name is Angelina and I go to Grey Main School. I love tacos. I like that you have told in your post want ingrediants you need.
ReplyDeleteHaw long does it take to cook it?